Students often consider the college application essay to be one of the most challenging aspects of the admissions process. These essays are time consuming and challenging to write. They are also a key part of a student’s application, showing college admissions officers who a student is beyond GPA and test scores.
Over the years, Chief of College Counseling Ashley McCarrick has guided hundreds of students through the essay brainstorming, writing, and editing process. In this post, she shares her top 10 tips for how to write a college application essay.
10 Tips for Writing a College Admissions Essay
1. Understand the two types of essays you probably need to write.
College admissions essays are very different from your English class essays or research papers. Although your essay should have a clear purpose and strong flow, it doesn’t need to have a thesis like you might be used to writing.
The first type of essay you will need to write is a personal statement to send to almost all the colleges to which you apply. Try to share a story that only you can share and let the admissions officers get to know who you are as a person. If you’re funny, be funny. If you’re passionate about a particular topic, let that shine through.
Depending on the colleges you apply to, you’ll also write numerous supplemental essays. These essays could cover topics like your favorite extracurricular activity, a person who has inspired you, or why you want to attend a particular college. With some colleges asking for nearly 10 short-answer essays, you have your work cut out for you! Each college decides on the essay prompts it will require, but you might find they ask for additional essays for honors programs or scholarships.
2. Brainstorm, brainstorm, brainstorm!
The best essays are memorable, even years later, because no one but that particular student could have written the essay. It takes time to find your unique story, so start the process early.
That’s where brainstorming comes in. Look through old pictures, think about your most powerful memories, and consider your quirks. What do your friends (playfully) tease you about? What places stick in your memory, and why do they mean so much to you? What does a college need to know about you?
Try to avoid cliché or risky topics, especially if your story follows a similar arch to others’ experiences. Divorce, death, sports injuries, moving—all of these topics have been done before, so unless you take a really unique spin on the topic, it’s likely that admissions officers have read a similar essay.
3. Get creative, but answer the prompt.
We love when students tell a unique story, but don’t get so creative that you lose sight of the prompt. The admissions office should be learning who you are, how you look at the world, and what matters to you. In an effort to be unique, too many students focus on a metaphor or abstract idea that detracts from the point. One student wanted to include poetry in her essay, but we found it confused the reader and made her writing hard to read. In her case, removing the poetry gave her essay a streamlined feel and strong focus.
4. The first sentence needs to make an impact.
Admissions officers only spend a small amount of time reviewing each application. Keep them reading by making the beginning of your essay interesting. Think of your favorite movies or novels and imitate them by finding interesting and unique ways to “hook” the reader. Don’t give away the lesson or point of your essay in the first paragraph. Instead, let the reader enjoy your story and learn about you as the essay progresses. If you read the first sentence of your essay and you don’t want to keep reading, try again. Hooking the reader isn’t easy for most young writers, and it might take several tries to come up with something that isn’t cheesy or predictable.
5. Show, don’t tell.
You’ll hear this advice over and over again. Most admissions officers do not want to be preached at or lectured. What they want is a great story that shows your personality. Put the reader in a special or meaningful moment with you, then explain why it matters to you.
Use vivid language, but avoid SAT vocabulary words. If you wouldn’t say something in real life, it’s probably best to leave it out of your essay. Write like you talk, then refine the essay until it feels like a polished but authentic version of you.
6. Don’t read college essays online.
This is a hard thing to do, especially in the world of social media and Reddit. If you read essays online, you are likely to make one of two mistakes. In many cases, students try to copy a style they read online. That’s not your essay or voice. Trying to mimic a successful essay is easy to see through, especially since admissions officers might have heard about a particular niche essay topic.
For example, an essay was posted one year about a girl shopping at Costco. The next year, essays poured in about shopping at Target, Walmart, and every other store you can think of. That’s not an original essay.
In a worst-case scenario, that essay you’re reading might not be that good. The person may have gotten into the college despite their essay, not because of it.
7. Rewrite, revise, and edit.
This takes time, which means you can’t start an essay the night before the deadline. For each essay type, you’ll likely need several rough drafts before you get to a stage where you can start refining it.
Rewriting means adding descriptive language, feelings, and more specific details. If your reflection isn’t as strong as it should be, this could be a place to spend some extra time. Think about what you want the reader to learn about you, then make sure you have conveyed that idea effectively.
Revising is making sure each word counts. The Common App personal statement must be 650 words or less. Look for ways to make your writing more concise or find crisp verbs to replace dull ones.
Editing is more than spellcheck. It means looking at your grammar, varying your sentence structure, and making sure your message is clear. Read your essay aloud multiple times. You will hear places where you can improve your essay or spots that might confuse your reader.
8. Keep parent and friend input to a minimum.
This doesn’t mean you shouldn’t have someone look at your essay, but choose wisely. Your parents may have different ideas about what should go into your essay. Parents might also want to inject more sophisticated language into the essay, which could jeopardize your chance of admission. Colleges can quickly identify an essay that has been overly influenced by a parent. The writing tends to be much stiffer, and you are more likely to include resume items. Your essay should sound like a teenager wrote it.
Parents can support students by checking in periodically to make sure they are making progress, finding them resources and professional help when needed (see our next point), or even celebrating when the essay is complete. This type of help keeps the student in control of the essay, but shows that you are a team. Students want to know that their parents support them and their ideas.
9. Work with an experienced college counselor.
One of the best ways a parent can support their student throughout the writing process is to hire an experienced college counselor early on. Whether it is through one-on-one sessions or writing classes, a counselor can help a student develop his or her voice without taking over. A trained counselor can help a student brainstorm unique essay topics, avoid common mistakes, and revise the essay until it sounds just right.
KD College Prep’s Advantage Program supports students throughout the essay writing process. With Essay Brainstorming labs, an Essay Boot Camp, and individual feedback on the personal statement and supplemental essays, our experienced counselors help students tell their story. We also offer individual college counseling sessions for students who are in the later stages of essay writing.
10. Stay away from AI.
You can write an amazing essay. Trust me. You do not need AI, nor do you want to use it. AI is not authentic. It doesn’t have your quirks. It doesn’t use the words you use.
Colleges don’t want to get to know a computer-generated version of you. They want to know who you really are, what you are passionate about, and what type of energy you will bring to campus.
AI doesn’t take risks. It does a really good job of writing a mediocre essay, but it doesn’t use style or voice to make the essay more interesting. The sentence structure, vocabulary, and insight are usually so-so.
AI usually doesn’t sound like a cool 17-year-old student. That’s who you are, and that’s what colleges want.
How do you start a college application essay?
Put the reader in a memory or place with you. Use vivid language and make the scene come alive.
What are colleges looking for in application essays?
Colleges want to see your personality, what you value, and what you will be like on campus. Colleges may also be looking for specific characteristics like initiative, intellectual vitality, or concern for others, among others.
What are some of the most cliché essay topics?
Think about the stories other students have in common with you. Death, divorce, sports injuries, descriptions of the “big game,” moving, and band are all topics that come up frequently in college admissions offices.
Read more about college application mistakes to avoid.
Need help preparing for college?
KD’s APPLY NOW! Advantage Program guides families through the entire admissions process, from choosing majors / careers to deciding where to apply to building the actual application. Students can choose to start in 9th, 10th, or 11th grade, and the program includes the APPLY NOW! Essay Boot Camp, a three-day session where 12th grade students work directly with the college counseling team to build standout essays for their applications.
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